September 18, 2007
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Infatuation
Information about cinquain
My attempt at this form of poem.They chew
habit-forming,
overdoses of love.
Addictive attachments join them
as one.Kisses,
needle sharp points.
constantly pierce their flesh.
Lust for that narcotic presence
unites.
Comments (5)
Nicely done. Love the first stanza.
Very nice!
Interesting way of speaking of addictions, it makes them seem almost beautiful. almost…
needle sharp! pithy. ; Nice.
Bill, I hate to call you out, but your link points to a spyware site. Here is the correct link: Cinquain
Anywho, I sometimes find it hard to stick to format. I’ve got a lot of sonnets that I have done, but cinquains are hard…
Have you ever done a sestina?